I liked this a lot, particuarly the meaning behind it.

It was well thought out, and very well written, really profound.

good work.

I really like this poem. It had a very nice flow and rhythm to it and you chose your words very well. The topic seems very thought out and amazingly written! Great job on this! 5/5

Ohmygosh.
its amazing
i love what you wrote.

it really inspires me =]
please, keep writing.

Again, lovely. Flowing perfectly and your usage of vocabulary here was awesome. I liked it a lot. 5/5.

The message I got out of this poem is that we have taken everything that is pure and ruined it, we dance to our own music, and we could careless what anybody else is playing. anyway 5/5 for sure excellent write

This was a very interesting write. I really like the metaphor that you used in this, very imaginative idea. The first stanza was really good and set the whole tone for the poem. You had great word usage in this. The words practically rolled off my tongue in a great flow. 5/5!! Keep it up!

"The day it passes by"
[I think you should add a comma after 'The day', for a slight pause.]

This is much better poetry from you. The flow was excellent and the rhymes were awesome. Really good insight, and very interesting piece. This is more like your work.

I liked it and it reminded me of my poem 'why has this happened?". There was a nice flow and it was lovely.*5/5*

Alyson