by Jenni Marie Nov 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I don't know what happened |
by LiveForHim
Once again...OMG!!! i love all your love poems, but why are most of them sad? but n-e-ways, keep writing, your flow is powerful, and your work is unique, keep it up girl! maybe you could get somewhere???(^_^) |
by LadyPearl
Good job, great emotions inside. The only thing is that you use "through" too much. Keep it up |
A great poem, sad and beautifully written.. hope everything works out for u.. 5/5 |