Will We Make It?

by Jenni Marie   Nov 20, 2006


I don't know what happened
Where did we go wrong?
How did this all go to Hell?
I thought that we were strong.

Boy, all I ever wanted was your love
I just wanted to spend my life with you
But now I see we probably wont make it
I guess we're finally through.

You promised you wouldn't hurt me
Promised we would make it work
But we haven't even officially ended
And already all I do is hurt.

I can't live my life like this
Always wondering 'where is he?'
Always wondering if there'll be another fight
So please boy, just let me free.

My heart wasn't even fully healed
From the last break up I went through
But you said you would fix it
And now all I do is cry over you.

I want this to work
More than you'll ever know
But boy I just can't take
The pain and wondering no more.

Do you want to fix this?
Do you want me as much as I want you?
Please just be straight with me
Tell me if our love will make it through.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LiveForHim

    Once again...OMG!!! i love all your love poems, but why are most of them sad? but n-e-ways, keep writing, your flow is powerful, and your work is unique, keep it up girl! maybe you could get somewhere???(^_^)

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good job, great emotions inside. The only thing is that you use "through" too much. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    A great poem, sad and beautifully written.. hope everything works out for u.. 5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~

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