A great poem, sad and beautifully written.. hope everything works out for u.. 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

Good job, great emotions inside. The only thing is that you use "through" too much. Keep it up

Once again...OMG!!! i love all your love poems, but why are most of them sad? but n-e-ways, keep writing, your flow is powerful, and your work is unique, keep it up girl! maybe you could get somewhere???(^_^)