by Bloody Chocolate x Hopeless Romantic Nov 20, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
*you've always put other's feelings first |
by Stephanie
Wow, strong poem you wrote here. I can also relate to this one, me and my mom fight A LOT! |
I liked this. It was a little jumpy, and didn't flow as well as it could, but overall: very good job. Remember to always capitalize where you need to (e.g. when saying 'I'). Good spelling and grammar is always a key aspect to good poetry. |