I liked this. It was a little jumpy, and didn't flow as well as it could, but overall: very good job. Remember to always capitalize where you need to (e.g. when saying 'I'). Good spelling and grammar is always a key aspect to good poetry.

Wow, strong poem you wrote here. I can also relate to this one, me and my mom fight A LOT!

up to now i know this poem sucks
but the rhymes just don't come out
on expressing family feelings
i guess i have no luck

^ My favorite stanza. I too have trouble writing sometimes because my feelings and emotions are so jumbled up!

Great poem you wrote here! Keep writing. 5/5

Stephanie