Very nicely written Sir.. it's added some extra's though, needs going through and deleting them, other than that.. Very nicely written.. The flow is excellent 5/5 xx

I'm not a teen and still searching for the meaning of life lol

Have Eddited thanks Donna

Simple and to the point. Good advice to give to your son. Keep up the great job John! 5/5

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Letty

Thats cool. i liked the poem. short and to the point. please check out mine if you dont mind.

I think it's very simple and yet has a lot of meaning to it. I also like that the title becomes apart of the poem by explaining what it means. Great job and keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun