I loved the way you started this...the rhyming was greattt!!! But, I kinda lost it at the end. =/ Lol. Maybe its cos I just woke up but yeah, I might have to read over it in a few. Heh. Other than my confused brain, I loved it!

-Liz

LOVED IT!!!!!
I find that when I dont know what I am writing about, its when my best work comes out. I guess the same is for you... cause you did a great job!!!

5/5

Unique and original...still a very good read.