Aww that's really sweet Hun.. was the 1st line 2nd stanza sposed to be 'hand' tho and not 'here'?.. very well done :] 5/5 xx

Great poem ciao, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Bryan,

Aww that was sooo cute... i luh-oved it !!! good job

I couldnt really get into this one... it seemed shaky, not quiete concreate. yet i knew exactly what you were saying.

Aawwww i cant believe that is for me are u trying to give me a heart attack *muah*