by RaNdOmRoB Nov 20, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
When you come near the flowers wilt, the trees burn, and the water freezes. |
by hayley
Another great one. then how come you wrote about weddings and stuff and you getting married? |
by JaneGirl28
Kinda confusing work a little more on ryming and focus on the mood and message from the poem. this is a good poem just work on the little thing at it will be better. |