Chels.....
God how it hurts that this is tearing you to pieces.
Hold on to your faith deary and hopefully your Dad will soon let the Lord into his life.
I am here for you A.I.D no matter the time of day or night. You have my number.
Such a heart touching write Chels and I do hope with all my heart that you hear those words " I’d like to come home " very soon.
Love ya Sweet Pea .....and don't ever forget it!

Omg I can so totally relate to that I love it soo muchh your an awsome poet.

I love you peom it says so much. My father drinks more the he says he loves me. My mom dosent call me she just thinks of herself . She never calls me just only in my dreams :(

This is really beautiful.. it truly is. and just because ur dads not there NEVER think he doesnt love u. this will get bettr they always do : )

*W O W* - that was an amazing poem. I loved how you explained everything. I hope things work out
for you! Keep writting!

Thalliday♥
xox

What a bittersweet poem. Nice choice of words, great job overall.

Great poem it brought tears to my eyes keep it up

Its Rely Good But It Did Not Tuch Me
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My Friend Loves It

That poem is so adorable and so touching and when i read it, it reminded me of a poem that i wrote thats on hear a little bit you should check it out if you can but i know what its like not to have a dad at home and wanting him to come back. Keep in touch.
-Mo-MO

Thats a good poem 5/5 i wish my dad would leave me. i relly do.

5/5. Wow. Amazing poem. You sure do have talent to make your poems amazing.

I really liked this poem. A lot of emotion was put into it. Good job 5/5

I like this poem a lot.Congratulations,you have done a great work.Best regards,Michelle XxX

Aww this is sad...and if its true..im so sorry... keep your head up though .*hugs*..

the poem is written beautifully..its such a heartfelt piece...nice job.5/5

Whoa..................

Wow this is an amazing poem! great job! i hope your dad comes home and finds the Lord. Christ is such a powerful thing :) i can relate to this poem, because my dad was a drug addict when my mom kicked him out. its weird knowing i grew up without him but im over it. its a great poem though :DDD

Very detailed, and insightful. love it

I can't say I know how you feel, but I can get the idea of the emotion you put behind this particular piece of work. If you can get anyone to feel the emotion you put into it, you succeeded, so..good job excellent work :)

Really deep...cant say i feel that way about my father though! if this is true, hope you are alright and pull through it :)

This poem is amazing !
I loved it ! I give you 11/10.
this poem really relates to my life, & I understand
what your going through. It's tough, I know. My dad left when I was 10 or 11, and I'm now 14, it's been very hard, but I know you can get through it .
goodluck ; <3