Everything that surrounded me

by Tylor Dent   Nov 20, 2006


All the stuff i accomplished,everything ive done
was accomplised for a reason done for someone.
and in my mind i can only think.
being with u how fast inlove i sink.

everything ive given up and everything ive made.
was nothing compared to the things u said.
ull never notice the way i look at u when u walk in to the room.
i never thought we would end so soon.

and the way i felt when i held u close.
is the memory i keep with me the most.
and when i held ur hand so tight.
was the only moment in my life when everything felt right.

and when i kissed ur lips it filled me with joy.
u never treated me like some stupid toy.
but u never made me feel down like everyone else did.
u never treated me like some immature kid.

u made me someone i wanted to be.
in my self u made me believe.
ur the only person who ever made me so happy.
now ur gone along with everything that surrounded me.

JayJay
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  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    You use this style alot making ur title the last line, sum readers might be turned off by this, most look for variety and new styles, people who can write about almost anything, just a warning bc sum people on this site will start not reading if ur stuffs always hte same. but not me i kno how much effort poems take and i respect ur stuff. peace

    lissa

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