I like this it is good i like it i wish i couldve wrote this for the person i like secretly. well good job 5.5

The repetition was written nicely, and didn't seem forced at all. I can relate to this poem 100%, as i bet alot of people could. It says alot, in a small amount of words. The laststanza was perfect for an ending, they were my favorite lines. An excellent write. 5/5

Tammie

Aww it's adorable. But sad and depressing at the same time. It's like you want him to notice you, but it's just not happening.

The flow was really good I found. It didn't feel at all forced. The vocabulary was well used, and original rhymes were created. And I just loved it. ^_^ It had good emotion and a great way of telling the reader that you're in love...but he's not in love with you back. If you ever need to talk, I be here. =D 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow, beautiful! that is so sweet! i loved it! are you really only 13? thats hard to believe. you're a very good poet! 5/5

Wow, the rythym is consistant and the rhyming is- well- excellent! keep it up! 5/5

Great rhythm and ryhming. It has a nice flow.5/5. Keep up the good work. I really liked this poem. :)

Simply amazing gurl!!! i can relate to this sooooooooooooo much!! i love this........sh!t i love ALL your work lol!!!

_Mya_

Aww that was so cute! it flowed so nice, and it was so pleading, i really liked it, nice job.5/5

I thought this was really cute.
I liked the repetition used, I think it made a strong impact.

Aww.
This was adorable and sad, at the same time! =]
I really liked the repetition that you used, it made the poem stick out more.
Your flow was excellent and I can tell that you put quite a bit of emotions into this one.
Great job! 5/5 Keep it up!

Stephanie

I like the way you used the repetitive stylein this poem it went along nicely with the rhyme sceme, and the flow was perfect nice write 5/5

That was short and soo sweet.
Keep it up girl.
Thank you very much for the comments and rates on my poems.
They ment alot to me.
Look out for more of my new poems if I ever get any. Lol. Later Girl!
God Bless 5/5!

~*Tay*~

This poem is wonderful and rhymes perfectly but it hurts me when i read it but good job

I love your poem this is a great poem:P 5/5 great job

komment/rate mine thanx