My Saturday Night

by The Poetic Child   Nov 21, 2006


It all started getting ready for the parade,
Rushing to get to school, to see my babe,
Its a sensation that I've never knew
every feelings getting stronger when I look at you,

Parade Marching is over, And theres a seat waiting for me
So as I walk up to my spot, Its her and a space, all I see
I hold her with my arms feeling so safe and free
Its So great, I love her and she loves me

Something about this day gave me a feeling
That When its pain I feel, she is my healing
My Smile when I frown, My Paper when I Cry
my healer when I'm hurt except when she walks on by

2 months on that very night, and still more to come
its Like I'm riding this ride, cause everything is fun,
shes so beautiful to me, Like the Perfect Sun-set
that just reminds me of the days we first met

Loving every single kiss I ever get
Adding to my memories I cant forget
So now as I write this in my Book of Life
Ill never get..My Saturday Night

*not my best, But she means a lot to me*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Awwwwww that was sweeeet !!! She better not forget that saturday night either! Cos i'll kick her!! haha. no but seriously, i loved this!!
    IMissYouLikeWoah. Lol!

    Ttyssoooooon!!!!

    -Liz aka Poetess

  • 17 years ago

    by Denise

    Awwwwww

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Aww David, how sweet! It shows how innocent love is when given to the right people! Beautiful job hun!

    Ciaoxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Daenerys Stormborn

    Great poem, an original idea about love too. you turned love into a holiday parade, haha! excellent writing my friend. however, this poem could use some polishing up (a couple grammatical errors) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    I think its great david, great flow, keep it up!!! 5/5!!!

    the one and only Bryan,