by The Poetic Child Nov 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
It all started getting ready for the parade, |
by Liz
Awwwwww that was sweeeet !!! She better not forget that saturday night either! Cos i'll kick her!! haha. no but seriously, i loved this!! |
by Denise
Awwwwww |
by aDORKable x3
Aww David, how sweet! It shows how innocent love is when given to the right people! Beautiful job hun! |
Great poem, an original idea about love too. you turned love into a holiday parade, haha! excellent writing my friend. however, this poem could use some polishing up (a couple grammatical errors) 5/5 |
I think its great david, great flow, keep it up!!! 5/5!!! |