I really like the way this was written. I loved the line :
"I dont mean to sound emotional
But I am."
The following line,however, has a strange flow to it:
I have those good times, genuinely smiling
but those times are limited though, they are what im living for.
instead of that perhaps change it to:
But though those times are limited, they're what I'm living for
Wow.. I absolutely love this poem. I can relate to it so much..
-Peace Sign, and smile one more time.
These Kodak moments are all you will have left
I absolutely loved those lines for some reason.. they really stood out to me. You did an amazing job on this poem. I really loved it! 5/5