by Leah20 Nov 21, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
When the sun begins to retire |
by Yasmine
It's really deep and has a good sense of meaning! doesn't matter how short or long! the most important thing is the message you're telling and the ideas you're expressing through a nicely written words! |
...Wow...the imagery was really cool and well cool. I love the wording which brings out the imagery. It all goes well together and it's something really cool. The first line really grabs attention and then the rest continue adding to it without taking it away. |
by Edward D Zurovec
This reminds me of the LORD speaking ,,,VERY,VERY GOOD!! |
by allison
Oh wow, |