Oh wow,
You're First Attmpt? I think you're lieing
cuase this is really good
Amazing Flow
and meaningfull
I love it.

This reminds me of the LORD speaking ,,,VERY,VERY GOOD!!

ending maybe with

Thats where you will find "I AM"

...Wow...the imagery was really cool and well cool. I love the wording which brings out the imagery. It all goes well together and it's something really cool. The first line really grabs attention and then the rest continue adding to it without taking it away.
'You will find me then
Waiting across the sea'
I love those lines. It's what kinda adds to the rest of it. Awesome write.
~Faith-less

It's really deep and has a good sense of meaning! doesn't matter how short or long! the most important thing is the message you're telling and the ideas you're expressing through a nicely written words!