by Daenerys Stormborn Nov 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Cold beneath icy coverlets in something broken |
Incredible, awesome, great poem. great format, great pacing, great job |
This is a great poem you write very well i hope you well bring up a future with it. Keep up the good work |
by Lore
Wow your amazing, I love your style of poetry and only wish I could do partially as well. I felt such a sense of grief and desolation when I read that it brought tears to my eyes. |
This is both sad and beautuiful, melancholy and full of love, the imsgery and use of laguage is very impressive, the flow and rhyme sceme is spot on.But it is the emotion that stands out.I will definitely be checking out more of your work. |
Great job BRAVO BRAVO!! *clapping* |