This is a very good and sad poem, great job storm, 5/5!!! keep it up!!! loved it. congrats for the POW.

the one and only Bryan,

Great job BRAVO BRAVO!! *clapping*
my favorite part of all was:"A smile plays across her lavender lips; she laughs
Remembering moments of sweet love embrace"
for some reason that stood out to me but it was gorgeous the whole thing was beautiful.
~~nicole

This is both sad and beautuiful, melancholy and full of love, the imsgery and use of laguage is very impressive, the flow and rhyme sceme is spot on.But it is the emotion that stands out.I will definitely be checking out more of your work.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Wow your amazing, I love your style of poetry and only wish I could do partially as well. I felt such a sense of grief and desolation when I read that it brought tears to my eyes.

This is a great poem you write very well i hope you well bring up a future with it. Keep up the good work

Incredible, awesome, great poem. great format, great pacing, great job

your servant:
david.