Oh

by Randomness   Nov 21, 2006


I got her last year
As my birthday present
A beautiful liver chestnut
Pure bred, Champion
Quarter Horse
Oh I love her so
but I haven't seen much of her
In the last month.
Must I sell this exquisite beauty?
My darling horse?
Who produced great foals
That are world champions
I mean she needs to be ridden
Thousands of dollars spent on her
For a world champion to pace around her stall?
She should be out there
Producing more foals
Keeping the line going
Oh must I sell her?
Please don't make me!
I know its my choice
But she doesn't deserve the life She has now.
Oh Must I?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Not a horrible poem. but there are still many problems. such as some of your wording. 'i mean' makes readers think. 'i mean really why doesnt that sweater coem in baby blue. like omigawsh. whatever. ' that prolly weird but. thats atleast what i think. these words should not be used in poetry. also. again, this poem is just there. it isnt making me feel anything except-she has a horse. and doesnt want to sell it.- woot? you have to make the reader picture the horse in allits beauty. and you riding her. wind in your hair. and the tears you will shed if you lose her.
    Keep writing. It'll come to you soon. =]

    x3 Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good heart felt poem. Please never change it. It is wonderful.5/5

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