Very good heart felt poem. Please never change it. It is wonderful.5/5

Not a horrible poem. but there are still many problems. such as some of your wording. 'i mean' makes readers think. 'i mean really why doesnt that sweater coem in baby blue. like omigawsh. whatever. ' that prolly weird but. thats atleast what i think. these words should not be used in poetry. also. again, this poem is just there. it isnt making me feel anything except-she has a horse. and doesnt want to sell it.- woot? you have to make the reader picture the horse in allits beauty. and you riding her. wind in your hair. and the tears you will shed if you lose her.
Keep writing. It'll come to you soon. =]

x3 Lauren