Soilders love

by Rachel   Nov 21, 2006


Every time you go away my heartbreaks
I know for you the same thing aches

You walk into the sunset uncertain
If you will be able to fix those who have been hurting.

your love is for more then me
its for your country to one day be free

the honor you have received
may one day be grieved

I try to forget your leaving
I just lie close to you and hear your heart beating.

you're unselfish and mainly caring
I'll near forget the love we've been sharing.

now its time for you to go
I kiss your face in the candles soft glow

as you whisper, I love you, Good-bye
I cant help but breakdown and cry

As the door closes I remember your face
Knowing no matter where we are

our hearts will always be in the same place...

dedicated to malinda becuase she feels this way about john

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  • 18 years ago

    by Malinda

    OMG!!! Rachel that made me get all tearie eyed.Just thnking about john leaving in 6 mounths rips me apart , but knowing i have a friend like u makes things seem not so bad. love u forvever and thanks for the dedication. computer class sucks.

  • 18 years ago

    by I Love You Renee

    That is one of the most heart felt poems i have read. you describe that feeling of loss so well that i felt it while read. excelent technique and language. i gave u 5/5