As always, i really liked your emotion in this. i think everyone can relate to this in some way: feeling alone. there were a few things about it that i would probably change...basically just that you put commas in where it wasn't neccesary and then the 'alone, bone' rhyme seemed kind of forced. but other than that, you amazed me yet again, WC!

Wow...this is...wow! ok...um...this is very emotional and deep...i could totally feel the pain put into this poem...5/5.

Excellent.