by Wasted Fake Smiles Nov 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I can't believe you; after all we've done, |
by emmerz
Haha i was getting into it, then you said it wasnt true. you really conveyed alot of emotion in this, and i thought it was really well done. there were a few things goin on with the flow (like the last line of the first stanza), but overall it was very well written |
This poem is awesome i love it |