Comments : I Can't Believe You!

  • This poem is awesome i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by emmerz

    Haha i was getting into it, then you said it wasnt true. you really conveyed alot of emotion in this, and i thought it was really well done. there were a few things goin on with the flow (like the last line of the first stanza), but overall it was very well written