This is a very good poem jenna, 5/5!!! keep em commin!!!

Bryan,

This was another piece done very well. Based on your other poems, I would suggest using another expression other than 'slams down the bottle' only because I've seen you use it several times. And though it packs a punch, it loses it because I've read it at least three times. Although, if this was my first time upon your work, and I'd never seen your other poems, I'd say this was an outstanding piece, with words of anger entertwined perfectly throughout!
Charisma*