by *Broken Tears* Nov 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Each and every day we are apart |
by Tammie
Aww.. i think this is a really sweet, but sad poem.I can relate to this alot, and you have heaps of emotions in this. At times i think the rhyming seemed a bit forced, but not enough to ruin it. Excellent write. A 5/5 from me. =] Keep it up. |