Comments : This pain is too overwhelming

  • 18 years ago

    by Word flow

    Good poem i like the simplicity but it also contains alot of emotion

  • 18 years ago

    by Tangy16

    OMG I LIKE IT BUT IT'S SHORT BUT THIS IS GOOD

  • Good poem i like all the emotion in it it tells a lot about your feelings and feelings that we feel all the time

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawna

    Nice

  • 17 years ago

    by Cellerina

    That is very true.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~[Pisang]~[Chives]~

    This poem is so deep. I can fell the pain. Your poems really show a lot of feelings. Keep up the awesome job.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Saber

    Wow i really like it very good expression of sadness really powerful