Aww.. what a beautiful poem indeed... I love it:D

The Angel of Secrets

"The distance didn't mean a thing
We loved each other with all our hearts
Our love grew stronger and stronger
Until one day it all fell apart"

The stanza that stood out for me.
Love is a wierd thing, one minute it's everything and the next it just disappears with no warning.
And this poem managed to portay that without being preachy.
Excellent write
5/5
*Gem*

Aww Hun that was really sad.. I can totally relate to this poem right now.. Very nicely written, it flowed superbly.. well done 5/5 xx

This is another great ;ove poem that touched me alot, you are a great writer. keep it up like always, 5/5 from me.

Excellent write,nothing more painful than to watch the one you love be with someone else.

Very good poem keep up the good work. I really liked this poem:) 5/5

Another exceptional poem... i especially loved your last stanza, very heartfelt, sad, expressive. beautiful job. 5/5

That was beautiful i very much enjoyed it. u have some serious talent. the last two stanzas were perfectly written and closed it magnificently. havent read much lately but im glad this was one i read. thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore

A sad yet beautiful peom hun. It was wonderfuly written 5/5 =]

Very good job! The pain of the broken heart is one of the worst to feel. You make this very evident in you writing.

I can relate to this extremely well.
The emotions seeped through every line, strongly.
I could feel the pain within the words.
You are very talented
Much Love, Tara-Kay