I got a chill when I read that.(not a bad thing) It was good. Keep writing.

,Heidi

Wow ... that hits you in the chest. Excellent poem ... keep up the work.

--Tiri

Hey girl even no u just started riting poems u are really gd and the more you think n rite you will get way better i luved both poems they were excellent n wen u rite more i will be gladly 2 read dem n leave comments n rate them but yea keep up the gd work k bubi xoxo

Aww how sad i'm so sorry that that happened to you well u expressed it well wioth your words

Loved the poem from start to end
5/5 im going to read it again

What can i say about this piece,

you told me you dont write much , i can see that quality is not something you can find in great numbers.

yes , no one can understand how much it mean to lose someone you love that way,i did once 4 years ago , and i still feel her with me everyday and everymomnet rememberinher words
, i can not coment more on this poem ,i did not care the rhyming or structure
this poem is from the heart straight to my soul..

prefect^_^