This is a great poem keep up the good work

''I just wanna be with you,
And wished you loved me ''

Boy, can I ever relate to that.

I loved this, it was so sad and touching, and full of emotion, your love shone through the words.

I liked the rhyme scheme and wording and flow a lot.

Such a lovely yet unhappy poem..
i hope things work out for the best for you.
You can see in your words how much you care and i hope love prevails in the end.
5/5
*Gem*