by Marcus
Being as i was there and i know how terrfying it was, well done babes, you captured it perfectly. 5/5 |
by Katlyn
Wow... Thats about all I can say... Wow....... 5/5 Great job |
by Jen
Awwwww loada feelin went into that dint it =]=] |
I think i was there with u all the time...everything was running right in front of my eyes and yet so helpless i feel in the end.....u really hv the talent |
by Krzysztof J
Ive been down that road before first time is the scariest!! get easier later, i loved it coz ive been there i know what you went thru :))) the poem is exactly what its like :))) |
by Gem
Thankyou everyone (especially Marcus) for helping me through. |
Wow.. i can feel all the emotion coming from this write.. its wonderful.. im glad things were fine in the end.. |
by Kayleigh
LOL. |
Hey Gem* |
Omg, was this true! Omg! Why didn't you tell me? You should have! Great poem! Lovely flow and rhyming! Well done sweetums! So Sad! |