Comments : The Test...

  • 17 years ago

    by Marcus

    Being as i was there and i know how terrfying it was, well done babes, you captured it perfectly. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Katlyn

    Wow... Thats about all I can say... Wow....... 5/5 Great job

    sincerely,
    Katlyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Awwwww loada feelin went into that dint it =]=]
    welldone altho i think im on the right lines to what this about
    altho i wrnt aware but still well done, and it rhymed woo

    love love
    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I think i was there with u all the time...everything was running right in front of my eyes and yet so helpless i feel in the end.....u really hv the talent

    & moreover...i hv gone thro the same stage in my life & yes i hv learned my lessons well..i hope so will you both

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Ive been down that road before first time is the scariest!! get easier later, i loved it coz ive been there i know what you went thru :))) the poem is exactly what its like :)))

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Thankyou everyone (especially Marcus) for helping me through.
    It was plain terrifying.
    It just goes to show no matter how safe you are, you can never be sure..
    Peace out
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Wow.. i can feel all the emotion coming from this write.. its wonderful.. im glad things were fine in the end..

    5/5

    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayleigh

    LOL.

  • 17 years ago

    by t. h a l l i d a y *

    Hey Gem*
    Beautiful poem. I love the flow and the topic. Your an amazing writter. Keep writting!!

    Thalliday♥

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Omg, was this true! Omg! Why didn't you tell me? You should have! Great poem! Lovely flow and rhyming! Well done sweetums! So Sad!
    xoxo