Being as i was there and i know how terrfying it was, well done babes, you captured it perfectly. 5/5

Wow... Thats about all I can say... Wow....... 5/5 Great job

sincerely,
Katlyn

Awwwww loada feelin went into that dint it =]=]
welldone altho i think im on the right lines to what this about
altho i wrnt aware but still well done, and it rhymed woo

love love
~*~Jen~*~

I think i was there with u all the time...everything was running right in front of my eyes and yet so helpless i feel in the end.....u really hv the talent

& moreover...i hv gone thro the same stage in my life & yes i hv learned my lessons well..i hope so will you both

all the best and take care

Ive been down that road before first time is the scariest!! get easier later, i loved it coz ive been there i know what you went thru :))) the poem is exactly what its like :)))

Thankyou everyone (especially Marcus) for helping me through.
It was plain terrifying.
It just goes to show no matter how safe you are, you can never be sure..
Peace out
*Gem*

Wow.. i can feel all the emotion coming from this write.. its wonderful.. im glad things were fine in the end..

5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

LOL.

Hey Gem*
Beautiful poem. I love the flow and the topic. Your an amazing writter. Keep writting!!

Thalliday♥

Omg, was this true! Omg! Why didn't you tell me? You should have! Great poem! Lovely flow and rhyming! Well done sweetums! So Sad!
xoxo