This piece is filled with such pain and yet again such love. I love the fact that you expressed your feelings so vividly. This is an absolutely wicked piece. Good job 5/5

I read this as the post in the contest. All I can say is WOW. It is absolutely flawless in my opinion and the flow was beautiful. Great Job.

Dixie

That was so good! T T
you are very poetic! ^^ 5/5

WOW That is a skillfully written captivating dark poem

Very interesting! 5/5

Whoa!!!..loved it just loved it!!
loved how it flowed!!
gr8 job
bree xx

Whoa,
it blew my socks off!
you're great. honestly
i just felt every
word.
how do you get it to flow so
flawlessly?
so beautiful :]
i loved it

I thought that it was really good, but maybe try to split it up into more stanzas to make it easier to read. justa suggestion:)

I thought that it was really good, but maybe try to split it up into more stanzas to make it easier to read. justa suggestion:)