I preferred this to the other one. The word choice and sentiment was stronger and the length made the whole message more succinct. It is often easy to ramble and I think you did on the previous poem. Overall a good write.

Lots better,better flow ,use of words and short,to the point5

This poem almost sounds like there is some anger in it. The only problem I found in it was with this line:

I wont play games with you

won't*

Other than that It was great! You rhyming was kickin' and the flow was smooth.

Awesome
5/5

5/5. I felt so alike in this poem. I've been played many times. I've always read so many poems to see if they felt like I have. I guess you win at that. Your an amazing writer. And dont give up!

Very nice. You put a feeling across reral well here. I like that.

Aww this is really sad.. very heartfelt.
It is beautifully written, and all of Your emotions shine through strongly..
Well done 5/5 xx

The subtle repetition in this poem works really well. It's not overdone, but it enunciates your point well.

The meaning is, again, expressed well. You seem to be very talented in that aspect especially.

(5/5.)