Very strong sentiment in this one. There is real passion behind your words and it is a feeling I think most can identify with. |
by Edward D Zurovec
Great read but searching at times for words,,good flow though and rhymning5 |
by Brittany C
I totally understand where you are coming from because I write for pretty much all of the same reasons. I love this poem. 5/5 I hope to read more of your poems in the future. You are a great poet:) |
Great Job Babe! This is sooo amazing! I love this stanza: |
5/5. Great poem Loved it. I feel the same way that you have written down here. Sometimes people dont take the time to see what poetry has done for us. Sometimes it has helped us from dying of suicide or cutting. It's helped me. You write so amazing. Keep it up~ |
by Brian
An excellent read! A poem of a poet. It really encircles what it is to be a poet. Well Done! |
by donna
I think most people could relate to this poem.. I think many people write for the same reasons.. It is the best way to let out all of Your emotions and feelings, and that is exactly what You did with this poem.. It flowed nicely and the rhythmn was really good too.. Well done 5/5 xx |
Great meaning, for sure. But the flow is off in some places. This line, for example: |
by Midnight Sun
That was REALLY good. And I think it's true that many people look at writers as being melo-dramatic and all dark and scary just because we can write something on a dark subject. I really hate it when people judge before they know you or even read your work. I've felt that way for so long so thank you for expressing it so beautifully! Great job and keep it up! |
by TracyM
Deffinately a piece I can relate to. And again beautifully written. I really like. |