Death After Life [`Double Malisus`]

by aDORKable x3   Nov 21, 2006


Heart
Split Apart
Tears Rain
I Succumbed To Pain
Eating Away
This Will Be My Last Day

Take All My Pain Away
Can't Live This Way
Don't Do This To Me
Debris
Hit My Head
Dead

-Malisus-

It has one stanza with six lines. The first line has 1 syllable. The second has 3. The third has 2. The forth has 5. The fifth has 4. The sixth has 6. The rhyme scheme is "aabbcc"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Form was excelent. the words were well placed, the lines flowed to an extent, yet there was enough to differenciate the image that was being brough to my head.. great work.

    -Terra

  • 18 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is very good ciao, you did great with this style, 5/5!!!

    Bryan,