Drip drop

by anastasia   Nov 21, 2006


Drip drop drip drop
blood dripping on the floor
how many can i take
oh just how many more

i didn't think id do it again
but i doubt myself alot
one day ill cut to deep and
my body will drop dead and rot

only if I'm lucky
will god take my soul away
unless he truly hates me
and lets me live another day

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  • 15 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    The flow was a bit rocky, but other than that it was a good poem. I liked the end, it was interesting. Because if you really didnt want to live any longer, I don't believe its up to God to decide when your time is up. Though I really hope you don't end your life, such a talent would be wasted.
    'only if I'm lucky
    will god take my soul away
    unless he truly hates me
    and lets me live another day'

    Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    I love this poem. its short but goes really deep. well written. keep it up.

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