I love this poem. its short but goes really deep. well written. keep it up.

The flow was a bit rocky, but other than that it was a good poem. I liked the end, it was interesting. Because if you really didnt want to live any longer, I don't believe its up to God to decide when your time is up. Though I really hope you don't end your life, such a talent would be wasted.
'only if I'm lucky
will god take my soul away
unless he truly hates me
and lets me live another day'

Keep it up