by ♥brokenhearted♥ Nov 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
U said u would never let me walk away that i was to inportant to u..that u loved me to much...u said keep that ring on that finger...i was urs and u were mine..u sadi forever i said forever...well forever ended wen u said lets b friends...u let me walk away...i guess i\\\'m not that inportant and u dont love me...i wouldnt b sitting here waiting for u if u did...but now there is nothing i can do but wait until god says it\\\'s my time..i\\\'m sry for getting in ur way...i never ment for us to end up like this..i love u with all my heart...but i\\\'m nothing but a past memorie to u...i just want u to love her like i\\\'ve never hurt u....i want u to just b happy no matter wat happens to me for u dont care n e way...but i love u...and good-bye |
It was a very good poem and very full of emotion, my only suggestion would to be to write it more in poem stanza form and use proper puncution and such. Otherwise overall it was very good!! |