by BrokenREALiTy Nov 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Don't touch me if you don't love me. |
Where it says "please just leave me life" its supposed to be leave my life. and where it says " and you'll have made my day" well it should be and you'd....." but other than that its good 5.5 |
by *Charisma*
Very well-written, almost a little confusing, but I think I understood it. Good job! |
by Jackie Marie
Nice... |