Nice...
The only thing I think, is that you should change this:

All I wanted was to just find love,
to
All I wanted was to find lone

that sounds a lot better. The other one didn't sound right.

Keep it up chicky. =]

>black&&blue

Very well-written, almost a little confusing, but I think I understood it. Good job!
Charisma*

Where it says "please just leave me life" its supposed to be leave my life. and where it says " and you'll have made my day" well it should be and you'd....." but other than that its good 5.5