Back to selfharm...

by JodiieBaybeh   Nov 22, 2006


This poem isnt the best by far..but this is the first time i self harmed after i stopped for 2 months

he was everything i wonted
the reason i wore the smile on my face
he lifted me up when i was down
and pulled me from that terrible place

it was the happiest id ever felt
i was deep in love for sure
he was everything i could think about
and i couldnt wish for anything more

but then it started to change..
we began to drift apart
and i knew it was cumming to a end
i could feel my breaking heart

with tears flooding my eyes
i had a drink..and them somemore..
my vision goin dizzy
i headed for the door...

picking up the blade..
i fell onto the floor
looking at my wrist
with faded scars from before..

the tears didnt stop flowing..
my heart beating so fast
he was my one and only
i just wonted it to last!

i put the blade against my wrist
and took a deep sigh
the blood dripping down my arm
whilst whispering to myself
\'\'why\'\'

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey,
    Well i thought you could of thought of a better title then the one you used. Many people dont read poems about self harm. And well the beginging of your poem make it seem as though its a sad love poem. Yet the self harm bit comes as a suprise. So i suggest you change the title and put the message you have at the end. Anyways that said this poem has quite a few spelling errors. I suggest you sue a speel check before submiting work. You have this rhyme scheme going for the first few stanzas but you didnt keep this coming on the last stanza. On the last stanza you also change your structure of the poem. You made them four lines you change to four. I also thought you should of used a variety of punctuation on this. That said the emotion in this poem was real. I know what slef harm is liek so if you need to talk about that PM me. Keep writing. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade_romance666

    Wow uhhhhh im sorry that happend to you and i know i havnt been online lately i hope ur doing better since this was written quiet a while ago..im still here for you jo

    ~steph

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