by jason Nov 22, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Slip away from the pain |
"don�t" Fix this little error. But anyways, I'm astonished by how you are able to construct the poem and able to pick the right words to make it rhyme. Good job |
Again great poem as always keep up the good work |
Goood depth and emotion here..so easy to go cliche with this type of thing but u avoiidded it vber ywell..nice stuff keep it up. |
by The Saber
My life in words wow really depressing i love it all it needs is some blood splatter and this would be perfect |
by loenly angel
Omg...what is up with the whole sad poems there all good and all but man make some good one happy ones..this is good but sad |