by Mommy And Me
Great poem... it pulled me in right away, but the word *curt* sorta pulled me away from the poem... lol maybe beacuse i never heard it before now.. but still great work. i like how you rhymed the first words.. ;) once again great work |
by donna
Hun that was an amazing poem.. Your poetry skills get stronger and stronger with each poem You write.. The flow and rhythmn was excellent and the message itself so sweet.. Well done 5/5 xx |
by Mommy And Me
Happy thought: i learned a new word... Cajoled |