Great poem... it pulled me in right away, but the word *curt* sorta pulled me away from the poem... lol maybe beacuse i never heard it before now.. but still great work. i like how you rhymed the first words.. ;) once again great work

-Terra

Hun that was an amazing poem.. Your poetry skills get stronger and stronger with each poem You write.. The flow and rhythmn was excellent and the message itself so sweet.. Well done 5/5 xx

Happy thought: i learned a new word... Cajoled

this poem was simple to follow, yet so complicated. i was following the pattern for i never read a lento before. lol. well anywhos when i read it the second time with out worrying of pattern i really enjoyed the read. it was awsome. great work

-/2 Terra