Comments : Only You [`Double Lento`]

  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Great poem... it pulled me in right away, but the word *curt* sorta pulled me away from the poem... lol maybe beacuse i never heard it before now.. but still great work. i like how you rhymed the first words.. ;) once again great work

    -Terra

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    Hun that was an amazing poem.. Your poetry skills get stronger and stronger with each poem You write.. The flow and rhythmn was excellent and the message itself so sweet.. Well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Happy thought: i learned a new word... Cajoled

    this poem was simple to follow, yet so complicated. i was following the pattern for i never read a lento before. lol. well anywhos when i read it the second time with out worrying of pattern i really enjoyed the read. it was awsome. great work

    -/2 Terra