This does have potential, don't get me wrong, I just found it a bit difficult to read. I would suggest maybe using I've instead of ive and things like that so some people might not think you're trying to spell a word and missed a letter. I also think limit the use of exclaimation pars but again that's just my personal poetry pet peeve. Like I said it does have potential. You have osme interesting uses of expression here.

Thanx 4 your comments guys... i write most my poem in word then copy paste into this site and sometimes using puctuation marks like ' in I've for example or (...) this site cant read it 4 some reason... so some times i leave em out to put in later but 4get... so mybad... i thought ppl would get tha idea behind tha poem even if its not the most grammatically correct...

"My other self bound to your alter
My heart set upon your dusty shelf"

Where do you find your inspiration?? This was really good with the idea's and images that were set in this piece.
It seemed very sad and dark to me. Either catagory
Well done
5/5
*Gem*