Comments : Inter mangled

  • 18 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    I loved this, the style you have wrote it in is great and the repeated lines add such a good pace to it. the title is what made me click, and i love the imagery it creates in my mind, these lines are simply beautifull,
    "I want to sleep
    inter mangled in your body
    Its where we belong
    together as one"