My Sister, My Rock

by Mousie   Nov 22, 2006


My rock for which I lean on
My laughter when I'm blue,
She's the one I count on most
My sister through and through.

Impartial to the words I speak
And never judges me,
The jokes and insane stories
Always set my problems free.

When all have failed to see me
For who I really am,
Her eyes shine deep inside me
And me she understands.

As friendships come and fade
And I have loved and lost,
Her shining love and grateful trust
Do not come at such a cost.

And when I need some good advice
Or a person to admire,
I know I'll always go to her
For her words, to me, inspire.

When no one else will listen
And I feel I've done no right,
She reassures my every thought
And makes worthy my whole life.

I thank her for the love she gives
And the person she maintains,
Her influence will always stick
For my sister she remains.

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  • 12 years ago

    by mizzy dominguez

    This reminded me of my best friend Itzel G♥
    Great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is an absolutely beautiful dedication to a deserving sister. How sweet! 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, it wass so sweet and meaninful, and I can see the love you feel for her shining through the words.
    I loved the wording and rhyme scheme, and I thought it flowed really well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Very nicely done. This is better, a lot better. A sweet dedication to your sister, it's good to see you have a good relationship with her. I'm sure you have your fights, but it great you are there for each other. Good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow, beautiful.
    I can relate to this so well, i have a gorgeous twin Mel!
    Your sister is lucky to hav a great sister like you!
    Hav u shown her this poem? If u havn't, i definatly think you should!
    amazing poem, the rhyme scheme is wonderful, and the flow is consistant and smooth!
    Great work 5/5

    ~Steph

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