Just Be Free - Double Malisus

by Gem   Nov 22, 2006


Fly
And don't cry
For me
Again, Just be free
And fly away
To where the angel's play

And know that from the start
You had my heart
I gave it to you
So true
Don't be shy
Fly ©

*Gem*

(Wasn't sure where to put this, it was for a contest "http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=67819" x)

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  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Awesome..stright ad two the point but still enough emotion to make you wanna FLY lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlyn

    "And know that from the start
    You had my heart"

    I find this true about someone I know...He's just that type of person to steals someones heart........ Very good :D 5/5
    sincerely,
    Katlyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    I liked that poem it had a wierd structure but still flowed so well loved it =]=]=]

    *ur alreet hun i get how difficult that must have felt but any time you need help them you know im there *hugs*

    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    THis is a great poem, short and to the point, I love good short poems.
    5

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Excellent piece, simple, short and yet so meaningful...adding to it is the pattern chosen by u....thats what talent is all abt...right??

    all the best and take care

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