Excellent piece, simple, short and yet so meaningful...adding to it is the pattern chosen by u....thats what talent is all abt...right??

all the best and take care

THis is a great poem, short and to the point, I love good short poems.
5

I liked that poem it had a wierd structure but still flowed so well loved it =]=]=]

*ur alreet hun i get how difficult that must have felt but any time you need help them you know im there *hugs*

~*~Jen~*~

"And know that from the start
You had my heart"

I find this true about someone I know...He's just that type of person to steals someones heart........ Very good :D 5/5
sincerely,
Katlyn

Awesome..stright ad two the point but still enough emotion to make you wanna FLY lol