Sa, I'm so flattered! I'm so happy you wrote a reply, and thank you very much for the email, also. ^^
Speaking of which, you shouldn't be trying to match up to my standards, because yours is so much higher! I love this poem, it's beautiful, especially with that underlying (yet distinct) melancholic tone. I liked your choice of words, especially "soft, cloudy grace".
And yes, it would be lovely to work on another duo. Lol, I promise to be faster in posting next time!