Nice work.. very sad..

Omg that was great. i loved it, im so glad u mentioned this in ur comment. it was spectacular. the emotion in it..i could feel it..im that 7 year old..ive said something similar but not the same..i just can totally relate...sort of.and it flowed well...great work. 5/5

This is also a great poem and I rated it a 5 I haven't got the chance to read the others but I'm prettey sure those are also as grand as the few I read already. keep up the good work!!!

That poem made my cry, it must be so hard to go through that, i was wondering did you get pregnet when you where in high school, i give you my wishes and prys that you can pull through the to the sunlight
-say goodbye and go

A great poem, and children always speak what's on their mind...funny how that is...we should all be a little more honest like them.
Charisma*

Wow, good poem! It's very sad...